The Greek Chorus
"The Greek chorus (choros) is believed to have grown out of the Greek dithyrambs and tragikon drama in tragic plays of the ancient Greek theatre. The chorus offers a variety of background and summary information to help the audience follow the performance. It comments on main themes, and shows how an ideal audience might react to the drama. It also represents the general populace in any particular story. In many ancient Greek plays, the chorus"
From Wikipedia.
I like the idea of a chorus commenting and illuminating the main themes. One of the things that the arrival of Web 2.0 has given is, for good or ill, is society where our actions are recorded and commented on. Pick a subject, any subject, and you can google and get the world's largest chorus chiming back at you.
The Dark Knight Returns, in my estimation, used this quite a bit. I'm not sure if Miller was intentionally aping the old greek chorus on simply commenting on the nature of the media, but the talking head interjection served the same purpose, to add dimensions and comment on the meat of the story.
And just to through in another of comic's greatest works to make me seem like even more of a pompous ass, Watchmen used the epistolary sections and some of the minor secondary characters for much the same purpose.
Since one of the main themes of BV is perception and what is real, I'm thinking I'm going to take a stab at using the chorus idea. I'm not going to use blogs or that kind of thing, that sort of zeitgeist mugging never seems to turn out well. It's like putting Rob Schneider in as comic relief.
The chorus will show different interpretations, different theories, different angles on the reality of what is going on. Some of them will be pieces of information that may or may not explain things.
(For example, BV has apparently supernatural powers. What I might include is a pared down primer on how stage magicians could achieve what he does.)
But I think that having pieces of the story told from various points of view, sometimes conflicting, with bits of commentary from the people that are around, to straight up chorus following Blackheart around and talking about what he does.
That last one is risky, but given the nature of the character, I think I can swing it. Along with the song and dance theme.
You maybe wondering why I'm talking about all this crap as opposed to things like plot and character. Well, it's because I'm trying to do something from a different angle. All of this kind of stuff will affect how the plot will unfold. I do have a basic idea of how the plot will go.
Speaking of which, I'm thinking of six issues for this, because it gives me a nice big swath of space to stretch. And it's a length I'm comfortable with.
The whole story can best be summed up with one phrase:
"Who is Blackheart Valentine?"
Each issue will explore an aspect of that, and a different section of the protagonist's relationship with her 'creation'. Basically, every issue will posit (yeesh, did I justsay posit) an answer to the question of "Who is Blackheart Valentine?"
Something like:
1. Urban Legend
2. Lie
3. Madman
4. Collective Unconscious
5. Hero
6. Myth
(Not final, just the idea.)
As far as the plot goes, the basic bit is this: Blackheart Valentine, whatever he is, has the goal of bringing down the entire criminal and corrupt enterprise that keeps the city running. The protagonist, and for fuck's sake, let's give her a name - Chandra, becomes entangled in the conflict when people who care, both good and bad, track the BV effect back to her.
Hrrm. Rambly. Sorry, just getting my thoughts down and organised.
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